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Writing a Flashback?
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I'm having a major brain fart and don't have any reference books in front of me to consult.

I'm trying to write a flashback in a screenplay but am blanking on the format. I've written the "scene heading", description, and then underneath that to the right a "DISSOLVE TO:". After that I have the new scene heading (as the flashback takes place in a different location).

I've written the scene, and can't remember how I'm supposed to go back to the present. Do I say "BACK TO:" and simply return back to the present? Do I have to write a new description? Do I even use back to?

Thanks for any help!

Here's a rough visual of what I have:

INT. GYMNASIUM - DAY
Richard stands in front of gymnastics pommel horse.
DISSOLVE TO:
INT. MANSION - DAY
FLASHBACK SEQUENCE: WAYNE trains a YOUNG RICHARD.

DIALOGUE (blah, blah, blah)
BACK TO:
INT. GYMNASIUM - DAY
 
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For those wondering, I was unable to tab it in its correct spacing so don't worry about that. I'm using Final Draft, so I'm covered.
 
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The way I've read in books (and always written in my scripts):

INT. GYMNASIUM - DAY
Richard stands in front of gymnastics pommel horse.


INT. MANSION - DAY (FLASHBACK)
WAYNE trains a YOUNG RICHARD.

DIALOGUE (blah, blah, blah)

INT. GYMNASIUM - DAY (PRESENT)

The current script I'm writing relies on flashbacks in a few key spots, and this is the approach I'm taking. I'd have to go back and look through some lecture notes on this, but I believe there are a few other variations you can use, too. But, "PRESENT/FLASHBACK" is just the easiest for me to remember.

Hope that helps!


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I've heard (seen?) a few approaches.

1.

INT. GYMNASIUM - DAY
Richard stands in front of gymnastics pommel horse.

DISSOLVE TO:
FLASHBACK -- INT. MANSION - DAY

WAYNE trains a YOUNG RICHARD.

DIALOGUE (blah, blah, blah)
END FLASHBACK

INT. GYMNASIUM - DAY



2,

INT. GYMNASIUM - DAY
Richard stands in front of gymnastics pommel horse.


FLASHBACK -- INT. MANSION - DAY

WAYNE trains a YOUNG RICHARD.

DIALOGUE (blah, blah, blah)



END FLASHBACK

INT. GYMNASIUM - DAY

Or, you can just put the year in the scene heading...
 
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Thanks for the tips guys!
 
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what if its not a flashback, its almost like a quick hallucination?
 
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For a hallucination, you could simply fill in "JOE'S HALLUCINATION" wherever the above examples use "FLASHBACK"...

(Or DAYDREAM, or FANTASY SEQUENCE, or whatever you had in mind...)
 
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