Hello, my name is D.A and I just wrote a short film I am working on getting produced. In reality, the film is just the opening scene to the full feature-length film I am currently writing and a way of having a piece of work out there to show people to get interest and funding for the real movie. With that said, I would love if you guys could read it and let me know what you think. Any format errors would be good to bring up as well. Thanks
If interested just email

Dsmith60@ucla.edu. I will send you a copy of the script in pdf format as soon as your email hits my blackberry. Just put in the subject that you are interested in reading the script. Thanks