Hey all,

I just joined this forum in the hopes of getting some feedback on my script...it's about 10 pages so far but I need to find a conflict for one of my characters. If anyone is interested in helping me out I would be very grateful and would give credit in the film. I am willing to send copies to people for them to read...just leave me with your email address.

The faster the response the better as I am due to start shooting in the next few weeks.

Thanks!

Jack Nichols

I've been writing screenplays off and on for over ten years and regularly for the last two.

I'd be happy to look it over if you still someone to. Just message me with you email address and I'll exchange mine and you can send me the script.

I would be glad to help you out too.Can you send me the script to my mail id mazhar.mohd@gmail.com?