i was planning to apply to USC but on time restraints finished a script within a day and a half and didnt turn in USC because I didnt want to risk a half ass effort. So I will be applying to NYU with the six page or less script... have a general premise and twist. But not sure how strong the material is. Anyone mind reading and giving feedback?

dunno if you still need a read, but i'd like to have a look-see. i've been listening to tons of creative writing (scripts) podcasts, so i'm an expert by now

sure you can private message me your email and ill be glad to send it over to you

I'd be up for that. I'll need someone to critique the script I am working on at some point.

well while we are at it, I could use someone to look over my short script as well. Any takers???

I'd be willing to critique it for you. I'll pm you my email address.

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Hey there man. I really hope your doing well with your aspirations. Don't quit writing even if it is not your end goal.
Try reading " The Writer's Guide to Writing your Screenplay" by Cynthia Whitcomb. Should be able to find it for about $30 bucks and be able to read it easily in 2-3 days. You'll thank me.
It is a great read. She will inspire you and give you direction in your writing. I promise you'll begin to see your own error's in your writing. If you still feel unsure send me a copy of it. I'll give it a thumb through.