Hullo,

This is the first time i've posted on this forum. I've just completed my first short film and am keen to get as much feedback for it as possible.

http://uk.youtube.com/watch?v=X6153bhdxpA

(or by searching youtube for "Tim Helena Personal Portraits")

It's a pretty simple affair but i think (hope) it works.

Many thanks for taking the time to check it out