This is the first script that I have wrote. It is for the short film my friends and I are makeing called "Zombie Chaos". I am going to spend around $1000 on it. I am using a cheap Jib Arm, a cheap dolly, the $14 stabalizer, about 4 or 5 cameras, and some equipment from my school. I am planning on filming it in September and putting it on this site shortly after that. It will deffinatly be and R rating.

Please read it and email me your thoughts

Zombie Chaos Screenplay

RexMcArtor@hotmail.com

please tell me what you think. peoples opinions are very important in movies.

come on people, please tell me what you think. You can either click on the link above to read it or I can email it to you. But I really want some opinions on it.

well i found it kinda played out...it's sounds like any other horror story ever...take some more time and think out something more original...but i will say i liked how the bad guy wins and good guy is f****d...we should see more like that...but i thought the script was a cliche horror script...

yeah. sorry, it was WAY too cliche for me...
do something original...

You should have called it Neck Bitter, because that is all that happens in this script. It wasn't scary either. And the part were the women revives him, has been done soooooooooooo many times before. I would suggest either burning this, or making it a little more intelligent. Because as of right now it's not.
Sorry man.

I am still making it. I revised the script some. But me and my friends are making it because the old 70's and 80's italian horror movies are what we are into. so we are trying to make movies like them. VERY GORY, stupid plots, bad acting, but great movies to watch.

I would think that most of the people that read this would now what to expect, I mean the name gives you a hint "Zombie Chaos" doesn't sound like a title of a great zombie movie. Which leads to the big complaint I have. Why is it called Zombie Chaos when there is only one zombie that kills only four men?

This is film as really more of an intro. My Friends and I are working on the script to Zombie Chaos 2: "Unknown Name" (we haven't came up with the second title yet). This is going to be a full length film. And due to where that starts, we need the Zombie Chaos to show what is leading up to it.

that makes more sense.