This is a short film I made last spring called The First Kiss. It's inspired by the Robert Browning poem "Porphyria's Lover." Let me know what you think.

This message has been edited. Last edited by: Studentfilms.com,

I'm no where near to be any kind of expert, but heres my humble opinion; good acting/diaolgues, slow paced which sets perfectly the mood, I'd change the locations a bit and maybe some compositions. Great selection of music. Based on a good poem.

Thanks for sharing