Synopsis: Veronica's encounters with the opposite sex yield such dividends as strange stories and bizarre random interactions. When she finally meets someone normal she is dismayed to find that she is twice as old as he. Only by rejecting the conventional partners and relationships she craves will she finally find love.
It could've been edited down to about half the length that it was. Also, watch those turn of phrases in your screenplay. I know a lot of people say, "I could care less", but actually what they mean is, "I couldn't care less." Just because real life is improper it doesn't give license for us screenwriters to be. "see: Part 2 - 1:17"
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