Hello Guys!
Just wanted to ask you if you could please feedback on my short film?
It was made for competition but... well...

Anyway... please have a look?

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Np0X8VHXQLM

Synopsis:
A young film-maker and his friends try to enter a short film competition, unfortunately he struggles not only with lack of actors who decide not to turn up on the day but also working with his friends who don't know much about film making. A real life story, based on Lukas DiSparrow's film-making experience.