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Drama film added by Jacob Crow, Feb 3, 2017
Pros - Keeped the attention quite high -till the end
Cons - Some minor mistakes
Very nice, and caught my attention until the end. A minor sound editing mistake (car cannot run with the starting engine noise) and a noisy image in darkest scenes - maybe some post production to increase image quality would be useful.
Overall, a very good job!
Pros - screenplay is good
Cons - Cinematography and the idea
The direction and screenplay are very good. But when I finished the film I didn't feel any sort of beginning or ending for this story line. It feels like one scene of a film. you could have chosen a better concept or should have taken more time to give understanding of the characters and their situations.
Pros - The editing
Cons - The casting and cinematography
The edit on this was really nice, the pacing was good as were the gun effects. As far as the narrative goes, it's basic, but it works. It kept me hooked, but it feels more like a scene from a longer film rather than a short film in it's own right. We don't really learn anything about the characters or what they are doing.
In general the footage looks a bit underexposed and noisy.
I know that this was a Sixth Form project, but I also think that it would have been more engaging if the actors were age appropriate. It's pretty easy to find older actors to work for free through sites like StarNow.
That being said, nice work in general, keep it up!