: I loved the storyline and I think it followed a consistent theme throughout
: Needs better shot types, cinematic lighting
I am giving this review because I was captured by the beginning scene of this short film. This is a great story and it is very well written. Follows a tight script and overall storyline. There is a clear beginning middle and end. However there are some things lacking, like cinematic shots, and overall color. Other than that it is a great short film, and I hope you continue to make