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ELEPHANT - A tale of seeing pink elephants

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  1. Bad Media Student
    Pros - Design, unfolding plot
    Cons - Shot composition, exposure
    First off, nice job man. I liked the nature of the film ie. how many elements were kept hidden throughout.
    Constructive criticism: Be careful of over-exposed shots when shooting in daylight. I think, like the other reviewer said, a bit of color grading would do it justice.
    I liked the ending too.
    I definitely wanna see more.
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    1. utopiumproductions
      Thanks for the feedback. I totally agree with the colour grading, some shots, especially near the end are over exposed. We ran out of time and at the time I was very inexperienced. Thanks for the positive story feedback.
      utopiumproductions, Sep 4, 2018
  2. john pappas
    "Good acting"
    Pros - Acting
    Cons - Editing, Script
    I liked the acting in this was funny.
    Should have been shorter or have more action with the drunkard, some color grading on top to give a feeling to the mood would also be great.
    Maybe some handheld shots.
    Script was weak, it was more of showing a situation than a story.
    That's what I felt.
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    1. utopiumproductions
      Thank you for the feedback. As a first effort I really enjoyed how it turned out but that's what it's all about isn't - taking criticism positively and making it better for the future
      utopiumproductions, Aug 17, 2018