Pros: The actress was good. Editing skills are good.
Cons: Music played all time does not necessarily emphasis the character's mood. I would be better if there were some Foley Sound to help telling the story with sounds.
Title font could have been better.
I didn't get how stressed the actress was though. More scenes would help a bit.
I like the squirrel thing to make pass the time. Keep it up
Pros: Script is great because we already jump into the character's universe and desire at the first seconds. Editing is good to me too even if I'm not a specialist.
Cons: Music could have better fade in and fade out to emphasis certain scenes
I was absorbed by the story told by the character's doing without dialogue. At first, I didn't know what the goal of the movie was until I saw it was like an uplifting motivation film. Editing is great.