The composition was a little lacking, but the eerie feeling in all was conveyed pretty well. The angles were a little choppy, but that is understandable if you were filming this alone, I especially enjoyed the scene in-front of the slider door.
The audio volume was a little uncomfortable in parts, so maybe work on balancing that a little. Overall, nice job and keep working on dynamic angles and pacing.
The audio volume was a little uncomfortable in parts, so maybe work on balancing that a little. Overall, nice job and keep working on dynamic angles and pacing.