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Pros: Great camera angles
Great Job for your first film
Cons: Make sure all shots are still
I think for your first time you did a pretty good job. I liked the incorporation of the split screen. Make sure you don't have any jump cuts (scene when you got up from the table outside and ran towards the car, there was a jumpcut there). That probably could be smoothed out with a cross dissolve. Next time try to incorporate some sound effects for things that would normally have sound (splashing water when you fell in the pool the 2nd time) Make sure you keep those shots steady (running scene) Consider using a dolly. Nice Job overall