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PREMONITION

a father has a premonition which prompts him to reconcile with his son.

Film Information & Plot


Duration
1:6
Film made while attending
n/a
Camera
sony 700
Software Used
imovie
Other Film Equipment Used:
tripod, lights, gels, costume
Film was submitted to following Schools
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Were you Accepted?
No
Awards won
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whilst jogging in the forest a father is stopped and force handed a scroll by a hooded messenger. the message on the scroll doesn't seem to make any sense but it causes the father to wake up. it was a weird dream. seconds later the fone rings and now the message on the scroll makes sense and it prompts the father to reconcile with his son.

PREMONITION is another 1 man micro budget very short by volker allert using no crew or actors.

Comments

Just feels like you're trying to force a deeper message into a micro film. Problem is you have too many moving parts. Which sounds odd considering only 3 things happen. But perhaps a little more precise dialogue with the son. As director/writers we often don't want to spoon feed the audience but in a micro short it can work(sometimes). All in all, I say scale back the concept a little. Micro shorts don't have to be profound because there typically isn't room for them to be. Decent editing by the way. Keep grinding.
 

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Category
Sci-Fi / Fantasy
Added by
imagineering
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