Pros: Beautifully shot and was interesting from the get go! Good job!
Cons: The soundtrack choice could have been better and weighed the film down a bit.
I really enjoyed watching your film. The cinematography and editing was amazing. The story was cool too. Loved that it barely had dialogue and was visual throughout Color grading was necessary as the shots could have been better.
Pros: Beautiful opening image, and clever characterization. Once we processed the characters as mailman. I think you could've worked on the film's genre and conflict for the rest of the film.
Cons: The genre was not developed.
I enjoyed it ,but if you did some verbs of the genre, and added some conflict it would've felt more complete.
sorry, but i found this film too slow and without a real story. finding the parcel without an address could have been a good start to a story. perhaps in his search for a recipient he stumbles app on an address that doesn't exist anymore and as he researches, the history of this house is slowly revealed.
or, as he drops and opens the parcel an ancient artifact falls out with directions of where it belongs... just a couple of ideas.
i am giving you 1 star because i feel there was not enough story line to justify a short film. keep going and get better. perhaps co operate with other filmmakers.
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