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Pros - The quality of the camera, and potential for the story line
Cons - The story was being told through sound but not through sight
I'm only writing because there is potential in your work as I've worked on a lot of big budget projects and most of the actors, script and other aspects were lackluster but the camerawork is what really told the story. My recommendation is that you utilize storyboards to get the most out of every shot. For example, to get the most from dialogue try using over the shoulder unless you get a steady two shot.