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Pros: Interesting concept, music supports the narrative well.
Cons: I started losing attention at about 80% of the film.
Really liked the concept and would love to see the story expanded and developed! Deadpan acting really helps set up the eerie atmosphere and create a separate world although against a backdrop of mundane scenery. In my opinion the music is a bit too intense in comparison to the background where the movie was filmed. Besides that I enjoyed watching it!
Pros: simple, direct concept with complex undertones
I think this is brilliant. The audio was clear and relevant, and the shots were distinctive and interesting. This concept was perfectly executed and has left me wanting to see more of this man's story, which is a sign of a great film. The soundtrack also plays a particularly perfect role in this short as it intensifies the mystery of this narrative.
It's an interesting concept effectively played out. Bravo. The looking shots definitely worked which was my biggest concern when I realized what was happening.
The only thing I would really work on in working with the actor. Perhaps you are going for a muted take on the character, but it's nice to see emotion (depression, shock seeing himself, fear, whatever).
Some of the compositions were tame, but not horrible.
All around, nice work. Will be nice to see a more detailed, elongated account of something similar.
Pros: Actor, Concept, Location, Sound, and Cinematography.
Twin, is a really good concept. It took elements of suspense, thriller, and drama and merged it pretty well. I felt that the ending was superb. Is he trapped in a sort of limbo for taking his own life? Does he now haunt the bridge in the very spot? So many questions!
It's nice to watch a short film that has a good concept, then see that film carry the concept through. I wasn't sure what was going to happen, but because the film is kept brief, the viewer is still intrigued enough to stay with it till the conclusion. It doesn't look cheap. It looks very well made and shows you don't need lots of fancy equipment to make a good film.