• To submit your Student Film, please Register here. You will need to write at least one constructive review of a Student Film already on the site before you may add your own. Thank you for visiting the site!

'UnStrung' - (16mm Black and White Short Film)

YouTube URL

Film Information & Plot

Duration
3:43 Minutes
Film made while attending
University For the Creative Arts, Farnham, England
Camera
16mm Bolex
Software Used
Steenbeck Editor Desk, Adobe Audition
Other Film Equipment Used:
Kodak Film Stock
Unstrung is a 16mm Black and White Short Film shot on a 16mm Bolex camera for our Film course at the UCA (University for the Creative Arts) in Farnham. Massive thank you to everyone who helped make it possible a lot of hard work went into making it

(Credits Below). Cast: Jack - Luke Munday Millie - Emily Dodd Directed by Anton Arenko Written by Fynn Lithgowe Cinematography by Kat Puddifoot Sound Recording by Luke Munday Edited by Daniel Brent Sound Design by Tashi Wangchuk &Luke Munday Produced by Anton Arenko ©Original Soundtrack by Luke Munday Executive Producer - Ellie Nicholls Special Thank You: Farnham Baptist Church Emily Dodd Ellie Nicholls Waverley Borough Council Filmed on: 16mm Black and White Film Stock by Kodak 16mm Bolex Camera. Shot on location in Farnham, England ©University for the Creative Arts 2018
  • USG.jpg
    USG.jpg
    1.1 MB · Views: 245

Latest reviews

Pros: Angles and sound design
Cons: Acoustic guitar mix could be louder
Beautifully done in black and white! Really appreciate the camera angles and no dialogue of the short film. Really captured the idea of the musician behind closed doors. I also got out of it the, "Open Mic" stage set for all to see is a look at in-balance between what you think is fame or fans are suppose to give you. However, I would of liked his guitar playing to be high in volume, higher up in the mix to clearly demonstrate is playing abilities.
Pros: The fact that the actors showed expression instead of actually speaking to one another made me interested in what was next.
Cons: Needed a little underscore scene music.
The introduction could've display the leading up to his performance better in my opinion.

A glance or look at the audience expression would've made his stage fright scene more believable to me.

She Could've looked out onto the stage to try to encourage him. I think that would've made the scene more interesting.

I liked how she seemed to have more confidence in him than he did in himself.

I like how she showed that she still believed in his talent and ability.

I liked how her expressions told me she was with him through it all.

Overall I think it was an excellent short film.
  • Like
Reactions: Anton Arenko
Anton Arenko
Anton Arenko
Thank you for your feedback :)

Comments

There are no comments to display.

Film information

Added by
Anton Arenko
Views
1,348
Reviews
2
Last update
Rating
4.50 star(s) 2 ratings

More in Drama

  • Lampu
    Two people talk about the significance of life and how it is lived.
  • Calls
    After being diagnosed HIV positive, a man decides to contact past...
  • One Home Left Behind
    A man has a brief chance to visit his former home and walk the...
  • You're Beautiful
    A short film about depression and the impact your words have on a...

More from Anton Arenko

Latest Classifieds

Top