The introduction could've display the leading up to his performance better in my opinion.
A glance or look at the audience expression would've made his stage fright scene more believable to me.
She Could've looked out onto the stage to try to encourage him. I think that would've made the scene more interesting.
I liked how she seemed to have more confidence in him than he did in himself.
I like how she showed that she still believed in his talent and ability.
I liked how her expressions told me she was with him through it all.
Overall I think it was an excellent short film.
A glance or look at the audience expression would've made his stage fright scene more believable to me.
She Could've looked out onto the stage to try to encourage him. I think that would've made the scene more interesting.
I liked how she seemed to have more confidence in him than he did in himself.
I like how she showed that she still believed in his talent and ability.
I liked how her expressions told me she was with him through it all.
Overall I think it was an excellent short film.