Pros: I liked the feeling, I thought you did a great job of leaving a scene at the right time to keep this feeling alive.
Cons: I feel like the lighting is something to look out for (the blowing out of the lights) unless that was done in purpose. Nothing wrong with it, it just stands out a lot.
In the end, I thought this was well made. I liked your decision making of using standstill cinematography and when you moved onto motion. I thought the story could have gone with a bit more energy, but that could have ruined the feeling of the film. Solid.