Well, let me get into more depth with the scene man. This is going to be the last time the mother talks to her son. It's an emotional scene. For one, the mother stood and watched her son get hit by a car. Second, she is going to see him die. Emotional? I don't think, "hey joe, i see your in the hospital and getting ready to die," is going to cut it. And I do go to school thank you. So, why leave comments that will not help me out? Or leave them and then leave some smartass remark? And yes, little dialouge is good. But it has to be written well and not just b.s. But I asked the old folks home, and they are letting me use there place anytime I want. It looks great for I want. So, thank you to those who helped.