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Is my short funny? How can I improve my writing?

Discussion in 'Off Topic Discussions' started by semiflex, Aug 27, 2018.

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    semiflex New Member

    Hi there, I wrote this short and I was wondering if anyone found it funny :S. Feel like it's not as good as it should be. I reckon there's too many silences and not enough gags:

     

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