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Is my short funny? How can I improve my writing?

semiflex

New Member
Hi there, I wrote this short and I was wondering if anyone found it funny :S. Feel like it's not as good as it should be. I reckon there's too many silences and not enough gags:

 

SammyJenkis

New Member
I've been there. I write resumes to become a better writer. I read here to know more about writing. The only chance to succeed with a resume is the moment when it is read for the first time. I treat this as a job from nine to five.If you have a hard work schedule, you just go and work, and no matter how good you are that day. I can sit at the table every day and give out the daily rate. I write about jobs because they terrify me. I think when we write, we try to get rid of our own phobias.
 
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