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Please watch my film tell me what you think.

tom crozier

New Member
i'm 17 it's my second attempt at a short please be honest and advice or criticism you have would be great, have to watch on a computer thanks tom
 

gilbay

New Member
I like the composition and editing. Story is coherent enough, even though there is room for improvement. You have potential, good job. I'll be honest with my thoughts, so that they can be helpful and move you toward a good direction.

Sound mix. (Sound between angles, there is a change in room tone. You can't have that)
Audio. (Dialogue levels at times is too low, and at times its too high. Sometimes music doesn't blend in well, use audio cross-dissolve, use ADR if needed for some lines)
Camera. (Too shaky, then cuts to a very stable angle)
180 Degree. (You can't cross it. Ever. Learn what it is.)

Besides, it is well done.

Good job Tom, keep 'em comin
 

ray raffa

New Member
Suggestions-
1) Use a tripod
2) Work on the audio- couldn't make out some of the dialog
3) Either duck the audio or run it at a low level. It washed out some of the dialog.

Nice work for a 17 year old.
 

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