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Pretty cool style, I particularly enjoyed the transition into her implied death. Very "shocking".
I realize this project is very lofi, and from a place of limited resources, but increasing the audio quality would improve the film drastically. Especially the transitions into silence during the showings of the text. Also you may want to consider using music or sound effects during the text sides (similar to original silent films). The plot was simple, but fitting considering the length, the cyclical nature of the film was good, but could be more implied and ambiguous. the last text explaining the new day is irrelevant because the same video effect and music is used representing the beginning of the cycle.
Overall I enjoy the essence of the short. Keep creating my friend