First off thanks for responding! And I get what you are saying about the plot! I have never considered myself a good writer haha so I feel next time I have to work on characterization more and of course as you said make the plot a little more realistic. But I don't know what you mean by lens shift? You'll have to pardon me I am self taught with this stuff so I don't know all of the phrases. Also while I got you here what should I do about audio? I keep on getting that fuzzy sound in the background, should I shoot different or do more in post?The plot is a little fake , lens shift too much, look tired. As a junior, In some ways the whole film is good . Lens is very clear, looks good! Need more experience treatment plot and shooting techniques.