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The Cinematic Brothers First film.

George2428

New Member
The video had a couple of good shots but the story was lacking a lot. All drone shots were not colour corrected and were left on the default profile. The beginning of the video was quite slow but that drew me in which i would say is a good thing, but peoples attention span is really low nowadays. Especially when they are not invested in the story before watching. One thing that i need to point out is the last "breathing" shots that felt out of place and really made up. It would be better if the character was exhausted and you just see him push the skateboard listening to his breathing. Good start, i would like to see more :)
 
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