Pros: the music was very powerful and gripping. Through this and the visuals I felt the horror vibe. You have also done a good job with camera angels. The camera angels you used are suited for horror and they magnify the tension.
Cons: In some areas the video is too dark so you can’t really see properly. Having a dark scene is good sometimes but your scenes could have been colour corrected with blue or something. This also made it hard to see the text. I had to put my phones brightness all the way to actually see the text. This helped me to understand the ending of suicide but some people wouldn’t have got that.
This is not really a con but it’s something to work on. Even though your acting was very good (professional quality) I felt that in some scenes it was abit too much. This is very subtle though but something I thought I’d point out. Other than that it was a solid short film .
Cons: In some areas the video is too dark so you can’t really see properly. Having a dark scene is good sometimes but your scenes could have been colour corrected with blue or something. This also made it hard to see the text. I had to put my phones brightness all the way to actually see the text. This helped me to understand the ending of suicide but some people wouldn’t have got that.
This is not really a con but it’s something to work on. Even though your acting was very good (professional quality) I felt that in some scenes it was abit too much. This is very subtle though but something I thought I’d point out. Other than that it was a solid short film .