Intriguing and spooky!
: I really enjoyed the shot where you could see the lights in the pitch black room when the main character returns from checking outside - Overall great production, writing, suspense, and tension building.
: Could use more interesting/creative shots, could use a bit more colour contrast and music contrast, and may benefit from a more blended vocal audio so the main character sounds more natural.
This was really inspiring to watch. I can tell you put a lot of effort into the editing and production of this piece - it feels very well done. This short film excites me because I can tell you'd be able to apply your skills well with a larger story/world to build on. Overall a nice job, hope my feedback can be helpful.
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