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A PARKED UP SITUATION

Sleeping behind the wheel can be deadly. Even when your car is off.
Suspenseful - has a lot of promise
Pros: Liked the tight, POV style camera work, B&W tone & simple idea.
Cons: I would've maybe panned back to where the person was trapped, revealing no-one there & that it was a figment of his imagination.
Overall, I really liked it. B&W is a dying format which can have so much impact when used right. I think it could use more electronic sound design & analog synths to give it a pulsing, dark undertone. The lack of dialog is perfect.
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Glad you enjoyed it! Thank you.
Reminds me of silent films
Camera angles/shots were good overall. There being no dialogue made it feel like it really embraced the silence. The sound design was nice and the monochrome look made it feel more old and also with the unconventional framing of it as a whole.
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Thank you for this review. Much appreciated!
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