This film started off messy, and I mean that in the best way possible. I like that you weren't completely symmetrical with your swipes of the brush, or that you didn't dry the brush after every time you dunked it in water. Even when you laid the brush down it was in the paint and could potentially lead to a literal messy situation! I think the periods of silence between narration were a great point for the viewers to stop and think about the questions you were asking and let them ponder about the statements being made. There's plenty more I enjoyed about this as well, from visuals, sound effects, music and the narration ! Nice job done with an experimental film!