ELEPHANT - A tale of seeing pink elephants

First off, nice job man. I liked the nature of the film ie. how many elements were kept hidden throughout.
Constructive criticism: Be careful of over-exposed shots when shooting in daylight. I think, like the other reviewer said, a bit of color grading would do it justice.
I liked the ending too.
I definitely wanna see more.

I liked the acting in this was funny.
Should have been shorter or have more action with the drunkard, some color grading on top to give a feeling to the mood would also be great.
Maybe some handheld shots.
Script was weak, it was more of showing a situation than a story.
That's what I felt.