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Pros: Acting, Camera, Editing
Cons: Cafe sounds
The start to the film was a tad slow, however that said what you did see was very intriguing - and as such I continued watching and very much enjoyed through to the end.

With bullying and harassment very much topical at the moment, it was an interesting review of this subject, with the climax probably speaking some words that many of us have wished we could have said.

All in all the camerawork and editing were great, nice angles and mixtures of shots and editing tricks which added to the storytelling. I had a slight beef with the cafe scene at the end - the background noise that eluded to a crowded cafe didn't quite match to the wider shots - I think I'd have ditched it, with the bully more likely to have made his apology with fewer people around perhaps...

Thanks for sharing!