: -Excellent production quality
-Sound quality was good which is a nice change from some other short films.
- Writing was extremely well done. Reminds me something Martin Scorsese or Chris Nolan would do. Brilliant.
: -I don't think 4 minutes gives the story enough time to evolve properly.
-Maybe more time for some background explanation (Maybe some moments from their relationship).
-I think the introduction is a bit abrupt. Why/how did they get to a field?
Overall I think this was very well done given the length. As I've mentioned above the production was on point as well as the writing. I guess you could say this about any short film however, I feel as if another 3-4 minutes could have given this film a nice touch and created a deeper connection between the characters and the audience. Well done, I look forward to seeing some more films.