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Drama film added by Brennan Weber, May 29, 2017
Pros - Color
A short, short film that could easily be expanded. The look of the film is great, I think it represented what you were going for. Further use of a drone could add onto the film, such as another view for the character running. I think motion blur would've made for a greater effect in that scene, or further slow motion. Looks like you tried something new with the effects of the bullets and view from the scope. Just more practice in other attempts and I think the work will become stronger.
Thanks so much!
Pros - Background score..film execution
Cons - Vfx..
Its an overall good movie..just wish it was a bit longer. But still a great effort and the drone shots were pretty nice...will like to see more of your stuff in the near future..Try to choose a little bit more longer subject the next time..Overall a nice film..Keep up the good work...Cheers !
Pros - Musical score
Cons - Vfx , voice over
First of all it was a very nice try , but I feel it didn't reach it's full potential. The musical score was very good.
But the voice over at the start didn't feel like 'war'.It felt like a commercial. Maybe you could have used some walkie talkie audio. The voice over of the soldier also felt emotionless. The vfx was poor . It was dragging me out of the story. If you couldn't afford a vfx artist maybe you could have used just audio. We don't really need to see the bullet , just the audio of a gunshot would have been much better.
Anyways hope you do better next time. Good luck.
Pros - Editing, Narration
Cons - Effects
It's a very good attempt. I like the editing and concept. Sound effects are rightly placed and contextual. Drone footage is very nice. I like how it turns from black and white to color. Visual effects can be further improved. Thank you for posting and keep 'em coming.