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Pros: The actress was good. Editing skills are good.
Cons: Music played all time does not necessarily emphasis the character's mood. I would be better if there were some Foley Sound to help telling the story with sounds.
Title font could have been better.
I didn't get how stressed the actress was though. More scenes would help a bit.
I like the squirrel thing to make pass the time. Keep it up
Freddie Lee 3
Freddie Lee 3
Tony I.

Thanks for the feedback, I greatly appreciate it! I'll definitely pay more attention to the things you mentioned in the cons for my next project.
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