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Pros: - good script
- nice goofy, over the top acting especially from Fannie.
Cons: - overall audio way too low.
- little girl delivered her lines too fast. Should have been directed better.
- at 10 mins 25 seconds, looks weird 'over the shoulder shot' (behind the knee?). Is she talking to a piece of flesh?
- good script, funny and good gags in there. I laughed out loud at her line to the unicorn "You have to stop interrupting me."
- nice goofy, over the top acting especially from Fannie. I also laughed out at the part where she comes out with poorly applied make-up.
- overall audio was way too low. I was straining to pick up some lines.
- little girl delivered her lines too fast. Should have been directed better to slow down.
- from cinematographic point of view, the shots were well done. angles were good, engaging.
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