: Witty, creative, sharp, clear, well-shot, and funny
: Acting might be slightly over the top (quite possibly a pro more than a con, depending upon your viewers)
For what it's worth, I think you deserve a real review. I've already "earned" my spot, but my interest was peaked by your film. I particularly thought your shooting style was great! It lends itself very well to the sharp and comedic tale you're telling.
As the film progressed, I was more and more impressed by the fact that you were able to say so much without words. You managed to make characters out of both man and machine by creative shooting and well scripted events. There was never any unclear moments in the entirety of the short film, and that's a credit to your shooting skills - and to your actors.
The film was very clear, fun, and concise. It has very few flaws, so I'm going to find "constructive criticism" a bit of a challenge...but here goes: If I were to try and find cons with it, I would say maybe that the exaggerated acting was slightly over the top, but if I'm looking from the average viewer's perspective, it fits neatly under the style of the narrative, and does no harm to the story whatsoever. In fact, your film might not have worked quite as well without it!
Very fun to watch, and shot crisp and clear with a good eye for cinematography. I hope you continue to make films, this film alone is quite promising. It was fun and endearing, and felt very professional throughout. You've proven yourself quite capable.
Thanks for the short film, and I wish you success in your future endeavors!