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Pros - The idea is original
Cons - Somtimes is visually poor and slow.
What makes this short film fail, are the technical issues. The lack of resources is always a problem in filmmaking, but in this case it becomes a big problem. It's dificult for the viewer to ''enter the action'' because of this "isues". However, the locations are good and the history is kind of Interesting.
Yeah, I totally get that the lack of resources can prove problematic when filmmaking on this scale, but could you be a bit more specific about what sort of technical issues you found? Just so we know what to improve on in future. Thanks.