Nice, charming and likeable character
: Excellent use of orchestration to set the mood, warmth, likeable and believable character
: Perhaps an opportunity missed to cut to the vineyard earlier, would add contrast to the bar scene.
This is a charming piece, thank you for sharing. I warmed to the personality of the lady and, as a composer, was instantly taken by the musical introduction. It sets the tone nicely I think and blends away in the narrative section to great effect. Towards the end, the lady is seen once more in the vineyard. Would you agree that it would work well to have a further section of this earlier on? It might add contrast to the lady talking in the bar ?