This film is shot very well, as you would expect for a film shot with a Blackmagic Camera (Which, as a student, you are lucky to be able to use). The lighting is good and sound just fine. The only real issues I can spot are with the script. Obviously your strengths are your camera work. The story was stereotypical and not very engaging. I never do horror films as most students tend to do them and when they are shown on the student evening, everyone gets bored when they are seeing 20 or 30 horror films right after each other.