Water

Holy s**t that's some really good some sound mix.
But i feel like you could have done even more with the premise, but i stil loved it! The photography was really good. The only thing i didn't like was the moment he writes, it feels so closed and claustrophobic (maybe was intentionalbut didn't really enjoy this shot)
I would have preferred a wide lens for this. The punchline was really good and i really laugh i can't lie. Hope you keep doing stuff like this!

I really loved the feel of this short film: the sand and the water and the colors associated with those two things. Also the sounds and how they are natural yet add so much. Incorporating the diary was a cool aspect. AND THE TRANSITION between the rain hitting the hand and the hand lifting the sand was wow. Amazing. The close ups also added some depth to the story and emotions.

Great job!