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<BLOCKQUOTE class="ip-ubbcode-quote"><font size="-1">quote:</font><HR>Originally posted by poptart:
Like others have said, it needs something more. At the very least, you've got to make a judgement about the guy and/or the situation. If you show the audience what you think about it, you give _them_ something to think about. Otherwise, nothing is really revealed in the story, except that the guy sat in a room feeling bitter and sorry for himself til he got old. <HR></BLOCKQUOTE>

can you be more specific plz? like...i do say what he thinks about at some part
 
Uh...I'm not really sure where I was going with that now.
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I guess I'm just thinking that it needs some context...I don't get the message of it. If the old man was looking back on what might have been, maybe. Or he sabotaged the relationship but blamed her, and in his old age he's doing it again with those in currently in his life, because he's pining over something in the past. He never appreciates what he has. I don't know, I may be way off base.
 
<BLOCKQUOTE class="ip-ubbcode-quote"><font size="-1">quote:</font><HR>Originally posted by poptart:
Uh...I'm not really sure where I was going with that now.
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I guess I'm just thinking that it needs some context...I don't get the message of it. If the old man was looking back on what might have been, maybe. Or he sabotaged the relationship but blamed her, and in his old age he's doing it again with those in currently in his life, because he's pining over something in the past. He never appreciates what he has. I don't know, I may be way off base. <HR></BLOCKQUOTE>
the main msg of this movie is..not all relationships you can get over..and the lies that occur for unnecesary reason can damage a person's life
 

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