<BLOCKQUOTE class="ip-ubbcode-quote"><font size="-1">quote:</font><HR>Originally posted by poptart:
Like others have said, it needs something more. At the very least, you've got to make a judgement about the guy and/or the situation. If you show the audience what you think about it, you give _them_ something to think about. Otherwise, nothing is really revealed in the story, except that the guy sat in a room feeling bitter and sorry for himself til he got old. <HR></BLOCKQUOTE>
can you be more specific plz? like...i do say what he thinks about at some part
Like others have said, it needs something more. At the very least, you've got to make a judgement about the guy and/or the situation. If you show the audience what you think about it, you give _them_ something to think about. Otherwise, nothing is really revealed in the story, except that the guy sat in a room feeling bitter and sorry for himself til he got old. <HR></BLOCKQUOTE>
can you be more specific plz? like...i do say what he thinks about at some part