well you're all right about me being retarded. but see, here's the real deal. i got this idea that i really liked and started developing it and then starting writing. i got about 10-15 pages in and gave up because i think its too complex. i'll post the idea below. please let me know what i can cut out, what is good, etc. thanks guys.
you've got a guy and a girl (teenagers) and thier in love. though for some reason the girl has to move away and can't tell the guy where to. the guy says he'll find her some day. fast forward about 10 years. the girl is a investigative reporter for some prestegious news magazine and is working on a stroy of a lifetime. the story (haven't decided on it yet) would bring a major company to financial ruin. her deadline is in a week. the company finds out and hires a hit man (the high school sweetheart) to wipe out the girl. the guy usually doesn't take contracts for women but he gets intrested when he hears the value and then when he sees the picture (she changed her name) he takes it. he finds her, they reunite, then he tells her whats up. the company finds out that he faild to do his job and finds someone else to take both of them out. the guy then protects the girl down to the end and goes off to kill the head of the company and either dies or finds her again down the road. i havent decided yet. but thats the story, as complicated as it is. it may sound like the traditional run of the mill action but i want to focus heavily on the love story between the two. anyway, please let me know what i can do with this.